by Ann Marie Williams © 2020

When the answer to a mystery is finally revealed, I think the audience’s reaction should be: “Oh my gosh, WHAT!?” followed by, “Oh wait… of course!”
In other words, a story should be laid out so that audiences can try to solve the mystery, don’t, but after the reveal they realize they could have solved it.
This means that the clues need to be present, but included in a way that the audience doesn’t realize they’re clues.

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